Can You See Me Now?

I was always in the shadow admiring you,

contented of watching you in the distance.

You never heed me, to you, I never existed.

But now, as I walked down the street with another man beside me,

my hand clasped with his, our bodies close to each other,

Can you see me now?

Can you, now that I have my hands on the man you oh-so despise?

Do you see me now?

Now that that I am together with man who owns the shadow that keeps you from shining?

The only man that made you feel little in comparison.

The man you admire more than anyone else.

Can you see me now?

Gah. This is the product of boredom. I don’t even know what I was thinking while writing this. XD Does it make sense? My fingers did all the work. It somehow just came out. LOL XD

 PS: My theme looks horrible in Firefox. Gah. T.T

Do you like writing? Have you composed your own? Like poems, stories, etc.

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! 8:09PM

 

 

Would you like at what happened to my car??????? I just went to school after doing that freaking poem you’ve just read at the beginning of my post and when I was about to go home, I got int an accident!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY CAR!!!!!!!!!! God this is fucking annoying!!!!

  1. Lyann December 5, 2008, 5:04 pm

    you should always be bored since this is freaking great! i love it .
    it reminded me of something. seriously, i love your poem.  

  2. Hershey December 5, 2008, 7:15 pm

    Wow. The poem’s quite nice. :)

    I don’t really like like writing. I just like writing random blog entries. Haha. Gulo ba? And I don’t know how to write decent poems either. LOL.  

  3. chiui December 5, 2008, 8:05 pm

    what a nice poem! :) Yea it makes sense. sometimes those things happen.
    oh gosh, sorry about your car! i hope something good happens to it soon, like maybe fixing. God bless!  

  4. shane December 5, 2008, 8:58 pm

    are you okay? no bruises? healthy? waaah!!! dami gastos niyan!!! you have insurance naman siguro…

    nice job hands! hehehe… yeah you can do anything basta dumating si boredom! hahaha  

  5. Christel December 5, 2008, 9:47 pm

    nice poem. (: i doodle when i’m bored.. i suck writing poems lol.

    waah, what happened? hope you’re okay. T.T  

  6. Jhoice December 6, 2008, 2:33 am

    Nice one sis.. that’s pretty gOod result of boredom =D

    Anyway sis, yeah I am using firefox and some images aren’t loading
    in ur page…oder than dan, everything looks nice
      

  7. Sarah December 6, 2008, 5:07 am

    Loved it. I wish I could write a decent poem if I wanted to! grr So there you go your question is answered I can’t write crap though I wish I did. I adore this layout GREAT job on it!  

  8. Gel December 6, 2008, 11:28 am

    I’m currently using Firefox and yeah it’s a bit messed up :s I’ve tried writing simple poems for school before since it was required haha. I’ve never written any for fun. Hohum.

    OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR CAR!!! :s I hope you didn’t get hurt or anything :s  

  9. jeniffer December 6, 2008, 2:53 pm

    ahh.. hopeless romantic.. that sweet of you.. hope in time you will have a chance to talk with him.. OMG.. I’m sorry about the accident.. grabe.. how can you fix that? ingatz..  

  10. jhoana December 6, 2008, 4:52 pm

    omg what happened to your car???  

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